Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.

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TODAY'S INNOVATION IN TECHNOLOGY HAS BEEN INCREASING DAY BY DAY. CERATIN FOLKS ARE BECOMING MORE CURIOUS TO BUY THOSE NEW ELECTRONIC DEVICES.

FIRSTLY

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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW

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HABITS CONSIDERED AS A DETRIMENTAL ACCORDING TO ME AND

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, GIVE A MAJOR REASON OF HAVING AFFECTION TO BUY A LATEST ANY HIGH TECH MACHINE.

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, STATE THE OPINION IN THE FAVOR OF USING THE ELECTRONIC APPLIANCE AS PER THE REQUIREMENT. ON THE ONE HAND, FREQUENTLY BUYING NEW GADGET MAY HAVE IMPACT ON MENTAL HEALTH

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AS ADDITION TO THE DEVICE AND

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MAY LEAD TO AFFECT THEIR EYE SIGHT AND INTTELEGENT,

CONSEQUENTLY

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THE DEVICES RELEASE SOME INFRARED RAYS WHICH IS LIFE THRETENING ESPECIALLY FOR THE ADOLESCENCE.

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, THE OXFORAD UNIVERSITY STUDIES IN THE 2019 REPORTED THAT 60% OF THE ADULTS HAVE ADICTION TO THE MOBILE PHONE OR TABLET,

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THEY DEVELOPED SERIOUS FITNESS ISSUES AT A VERY EARLY AGE.

ON THE OTHER HAND

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, BUYING A NEW PHONE AND LEARNING ABOUT IT USEFULL AT SOMEPOINT FOR AN INDIVIDUAL, BECAUSE BY DOING

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HE IS TRYING TO CO-OPERATE WITH THE MODEREN WORLD. AS IT IS NEEDED TO SURVIVE IN THE SOCIETY.

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, AS PER THE NEW REPORT OF THE INDIA TIME, 70% OF PEOLE USED TO BUY A NEW PHONE TO MAKE THEIR LIFE MORE EFFORLESS AND TO MAINTAIN THE SOCIAL STATUS IN THE SOCIETY. ACCORDING TO MY THOUGHT, I BELIEVE WHEN GADGET IS USED AS PER THE NEDDS, IT DOES NOT AFFECT THE HEALTH AS MUCH AS ADDICTION DOES AND

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IT IS PRECIOUS TO HAVE THE KNOWLEDGE OF HOW IT WORKS IN

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CONTEMPORARY WORLD. IN CONCLUSION, BUYING A LATEST ELECTRONIC DEVICE IS A BENEFIACIL AT SOME POINT,

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, ONE SHOULD NEVER BEGOTIATE THE CONSEQUENCES BEING HABITUAL TO

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TREND.

AS A RESULT

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MIGHT DECLINED THE DANGEROUS WELLNESS PROBLEM AMONG THE CIVILIAN.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

305 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

technology advancements
convenience
efficiency
productivity
status symbol
financial burden
obsession
impulsive
consumerism
sustainability
e-waste
environmentally friendly
second-hand market
repairability
upgradability

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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

many people say that the only way to ensure a good job is to complete a course in university education. to what extend do you agree or disagree

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and gives you opinion.