Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like. Other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few people believe that children should be given some
money
as a weekly allowance to spend as they wish, and others prefer not to do it, thinking that it is not fruitful.
When we hand over money
to children, we make them realize the importance of expenditure and savings at an early stage of life, which will be very helpful for them as they grow old. For instance
, my neighbour follows this
practice and give 5 dollars per week to her child. I remember, there was a time when she wanted an expensive toy, and had to save her pocket money
for 1 year in order to get it. This
way not only she learnt about savings, but she also
understood, which items are worth spending on.
However
, providing money
to children can sometimes be the cause of major problems, as the parents have no control over how the child will use it. For example
, one of my friend’s son used the money
he received to impress others in his school, and spent it on the items he can show-off, like the latest toy or buying expensive dessert. This
increased peer pressure on the poor students of his class who started demanding money
from their parents as well. This
is not a favourable situation for the poor family as they barely have the money
to raise their kids.
In conclusion, my opinion is that money
should not be handed to children to make expenses on their own. Rather, it is a better idea to keep their spendings under adult supervision, so that we can guide them about the positives and negatives of their spendings. I do not think it is a wise decision to give weekly allowance to kids.Submitted by ankitasinha02jan on
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