In many countries the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those cause?

In our daily life we can watch the
crime
rate is increasing drastically in many countries due to several reasons.People can deal those cau
ses .
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can deal with those
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happening
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fferent types of crimes in the different countries.Mainly the important thing is Lack of knowledge and due to financial issues.Due to these two the wrong steps has been taken by
the criminals.
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have been taken
When we consider the
crime
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the money
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