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In some countries, children have short school day of 5 hours. In other countries, the school duration is often longer. Does it have more benefits than drawbacks?

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Children in some countries often have a short
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 duration of 5 hours a day only, while in some other countries kids have to spend a longer duration than that.
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 essay will argue that having longer
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 hour than 5 hours have more merits than demerits.
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 with, the striking advantage of having long
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 hours is that children can be taught for extended hours. Teachers, while getting additional time, is likely to ensure children’s better uptake of lessons in the classroom. That could possibly help young learners achieving superior results than children who spend only 5 hours a day in
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, in the elementary examination of the class 5 students in Canada, most of the high achievers are from those schools that have a 7 hour
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 day.
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, a possible disadvantage of having extended
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 hours is that children might have limited ties with their families. Spending more hours at
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 is likely to spare only a few hours for the kids at home. Children might find those few hours inadequate to develop a quality relationship with family members, thereby it may have an impact on family relationships. In fact, a local university journal
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 year claimed that family bond is likely to become stronger with children passing long hours with their parents in their offspring. In conclusion,
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 keeping long
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 hours, leaving fewer hours for the kids to spare with their family, it could
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 result in a reduced study hour at home. Since children can have their lessons studied at
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, they could spend the remaining time entirely with their family members without having a worry of their study,
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 the advantages completely outweigh the disadvantages.
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