You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may be suitable for some of your other colleagues
Dear Mel,
Hope
this
email finds you well. I am writing to you in regard to the teeth implant training course that I attended last
weekend. It was much better than what I was expecting, you should go next year, it was very interesting.
The course started with showing the newest digital printed machine
. It is amazing how technology keeps developing fantastic tools for us. The guy who taught me how to use this
machine
is one of the best dentists in the USA. With that machine
, our daily work life would be much easier, and all the jobs that we do at the laboratory would be more accurate, which means we would have fewer remake jobs.
It is quite expensive though, but in my opinion, it is worth investing in that machine
. It would be good if you could attend the course next year, but I don't think it is worth it for Dani to attend it as she does other types of jobs that this
machine
would not be involved.
Let me know what to think about buying it, I really hope this
is within our budget.
Kind regards,
JimSubmitted by jimeilaria on
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task achievement
When suggesting the course for colleagues, consider mentioning how specific roles may benefit.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clearer structure.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins and concludes with appropriate greetings and closings.
task achievement
The tone is professional and polite, suitable for a letter to an employer.
task achievement
The main points of the course, its usefulness, and suitability for others are clearly addressed.