Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes for this? What solutions can you suggest?

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People are increasingly suffering from sickness

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stress

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will discuss the main causes of

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-related

sickness including

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sickness, including

longer working hours and increased job pressures.

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suggest solutions to these

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problems, including

improving one’s

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-life balance and

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. People are working longer hours than ever before.

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, they have more job pressures. People place themselves in these unfavourable conditions because the

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work force

the force of workers available

workforce

is a competitive domain.

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, some people aspire to climb the corporate ladder to gain high status and a high paying job.

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often results in mental and physical suffering because they have to

work

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overtime and take on additional roles which can be stressful. Maintaining a good

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-life and improving one’s

diet

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are both critical to mitigating

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related illnesses. People need to realize that if they live only for

work

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they will suffer either suffer mentally or physically and a poor

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will

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exacerbate these issues.

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, many employees burn out from working too much and neglecting family, friends, exercise and hobbies as well as the food they eat.

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order to reduce

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one must include a better ratio of

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, rest, recreation and dietary sustenance. In conclusion, in today’s fast paced world more and more people are becoming ill

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stress

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discussed how

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is often caused by long working hours and improper

diet

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Topic Vocabulary:

stress-related illnesses
hypertension
anxiety
depression
modern lifestyle
work pressure
technological advancements
social pressures
material wealth
work-life balance
mindfulness
meditation
stress management
flexible working hours
telecommuting
mandatory vacation
educational programs
mental health
supportive work environment
counseling services

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Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes for this? What solutions can you suggest?

Your opinion

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical, or other aid. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this for countries that give and receive?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behavior both on and off the field can have a negative influence. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?