Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job. Describe a job you have found for him/her including: - What are the duties? - Why do you think it is a good job for him/her? - What does he/she have to do to get it?

Hey Navu! I hope
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I've got some super exciting news for you. Guess what? I've come across a part-time
for you in an Indian restaurant. My cousin, the restaurant's owner, told me that he needed two part-time servers for the evening shift. As a server, you have to take orders from customers and serve food on their tables.
Apart from
, you have to perform some light cleaning as well. I believe it's a good opportunity for you because, as a full-time hotel management student, you can only do a part-time evening
, it is related to your studies, so you can get some hands-on experience as well, which will support you in getting a full-time
after the completion of your degree. I have already shared your resume with my cousin. He will call you on Wednesday evening to arrange a face-to-face interview. You don't need to prepare anything specific as it is an entry-level position, but make sure to arrive on time for the interview. I hope
helps you pay your expenses. If you need
details, you can write back to me anytime. All the best, Somia
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coherence cohesion
For coherence, make sure to appropriately paragraph your letter and link your ideas smoothly. You've done well on this part.
coherence cohesion
For cohesion, try using a wider range of cohesive devices to ensure the letter flows naturally from one point to the next.
task achievement
In terms of task response, ensure that all parts of the prompt are addressed with sufficient detail. You have provided a complete response which is great!
task achievement
Keep the writing tone suitable to the context and purpose. In this case, a friendly and supportive tone is appropriate, and you've maintained it throughout the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time job
  • duties
  • responsibilities
  • skills
  • interests
  • suitability
  • local café
  • retail
  • library
  • customers
  • organizing
  • stock management
  • application process
  • resume
  • cover letter
  • online application
  • relevant experience
  • interview preparation
  • attire
  • encouragement
  • support
  • tailoring application
  • people skills
  • passion
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