The charts show what Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare
three
activities that Australian Use synonyms
students
pursued right after they left their secondary schools in the Use synonyms
three
years 1980, 1990 and 2000.
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It is clear that
pursuing Linking Words
further
education and working were the two main choices for Australian Linking Words
students
Use synonyms
while
unemployment played a minor part in all the Linking Words
three
mentioned years mentioned. Working after finishing school was the only option for them that increased in popularity during the period.
Among the Use synonyms
three
destinations, the number of unemployed Use synonyms
students
was the least at only 10% of the total graduates in 1980. Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
this
saw an increase to 12% in 1990, it fell back to 8% in 2000. Meanwhile, continuing higher education and taking a job took turns in order of being the most popular option for school leavers.
In detail, half of all Linking Words
students
leaving secondary school decided higher academic pursuit to be their first preference in 1980 but Use synonyms
this
choice became less attractive in the following years with 38% and 37% continuing their Linking Words
further
studies in 1990 and 2000, respectively. Linking Words
By contrast
, only 40% of Linking Words
students
graduating from secondary schools took a job right away in 1980 but Use synonyms
this
proportion increased to 50% in 1990 and reached a peak of 55% in the final year.Linking Words
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