Some people think that parents have great influence on children's development, while others consider that external influence plays a more important role in childrens life.

It is true that for developing the factor of personality a

child

have to get influenced from both parents and externals. People think that children get influenced by their

families whereas

Accept comma addition

families, whereas

some of them deem that external

infulence

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influence

plays a vital role in every

children's

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child's

life. I discuss my viewpoints on the mentioned statement.

To begin

with, there are multifarious reasons from which it is analysed that how parents influence their offspring's life. The primary one is with the help of parents, children can

diffrentiate

mark as different

differentiate

between the right and wrong choices.

For example

, while choosing the friend circle, children often get

stucked

caught or fixed

stuck

and if they know about the general things, they do not face

this

problem.

Moreover

, parents

also

teach the moral ethics as well as basic knowledge to their wards which helps them that how to communicate with the society. Probing

further

, there are some other things which helps in the development of a

child

. The primary one is

schools

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schooled

and education centres. Because of these children get knowledge and know that what type of career is suitable for them that how to be in a society. As it is a fact that

teacher

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the teacher

a teacher

is the

second

face of

mother

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the mother

. They treat each and every student like their own wards. In conclusion, I think that parents and external influences are both important for the development of a

child

. Because

child

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a child

the child

children

can always learn new things from different people.