Environmental problems such as pollution and aimatic variations are increasing nowadays. The government have taken some measures at a global level. But they got only few solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?

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Environment
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Environmental
problems
are create
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create
by
human's
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human
activity.Today's ongoing trend, people are making influence
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of
environment
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and with it, technology and industrial area are
increase
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increasing
in the world and they pollute air.
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However
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However, government
government
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made some rules for saving
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environment
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the environment
from
pollution but
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pollution, but
they failed in their mission.
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intends
is intended
both
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perspectives
that why is it and how can be solved
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problem.
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with, there are many policies which made by
government
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for saving
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environment but
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the environment, but
the environment but
people did not
followed
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follow
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this policies
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this policy
these policies
and they continuously threat
environment
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with
this
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harmful
activities
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activity
.
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, mainly pollution
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is created
by industries and industries will not shut. So,
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is
damage
environment
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continuously
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continued
continuing
continuous
.
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, plastics are made influence
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of
environment
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, for
this
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damaging activity of people, parliament did banned on plastic. Parliament made more rules and regulation for
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environment
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environments
the environment
an environment
such
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as, do not cut
trees but
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trees, but
people
did not made
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have not made
did not make
improvement and they still cutting trees.
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why
government
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did not got
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has not got
has not gotten
did not get
well
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good
result.
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,
government
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can solved
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can solve
this
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problem from many ways.
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to it,
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Government
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the Government
should make strict policies for restriction on
human's
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human
activities which are threatening to
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environment
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the environment
. Parliament should arrange
seminar
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a seminar
seminars
for make awareness in human to
saving
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save
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environment
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the environment
.
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However people
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However, people
should give support to
government
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and aware other people to follow the
government
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's rules and regulation.
Government
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should put some specific fine those who break
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government's rule
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the government's rule
. To conclude,
public
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the public
should give support to
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government
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the government
governments
for their future benefits and save the earth from threatening of
environment
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