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You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend,  Where and why you move from there  Compare your new place to old  Where do u live now

#place #haven’t #chance #friend #move
Hi Sara, How are you? I hope
this
 letter finds you well.
Although
 it’s
such
 a short time since we met, it seems longer. You would be happy to hear that
finally
, I left my old house, and relocated to Hamburg. I wanted to tell you earlier, but I was extremely busy
in
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shifting the luggage that it got slipped out of my mind. The worst living conditions of Barcelona including no nearby shopping markets as well severe sewerage issues compelled me to leave that city. The Hamburg has least expensive living style
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 to Barcelona.
This
 new city has grand Shopping Malls with all international brands, mesmerizing lake views, remarkable landscapes, and primarily, lots of traditional style restaurants. In short, Hamburg is a dreamy area to live
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 years. My complete address is Deans Apartment, Flat No. 20, opposite
to
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canny road. It would be amazing
,
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 if you visit me on
coming
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 weekend. We will recall all memories of university and hostel
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 when we were living together. I’m eagerly waiting to see you. Love, Zainab
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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