Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and change the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Developments in
technology
over many years have dramatically changed the world that we live in, and some people think that earlier advances in
technology
have had a greater impact on and
been
the state or fact of existing
being
more beneficial to the lives of ordinary people than more recent changes.
However
, I partially agree with
this
as the advantages and influences on people’s lives actually depends on the particular area of
technology
. There is no doubt that some earlier advances in
technology
have been very influential,
such
as those related to
technology
around the home. Devices
such
as washing machines, fridges and freezers, central heating, microwaves and televisions were invented many years ago, and now nearly every household has all or some of these in their home, making life much easier. Though they have been improved over time, they still carry out much the same purpose as when they were
first
invented.  Another example is that of medicine. Despite the fact that there have been
ground-breaking
being or producing something like nothing done or experienced or created before
groundbreaking
recent medical developments,
such
as that connected to research into genes and stem cells, the benefits to the average person are still many years away. The most influential impacts on health have been earlier technological developments of the past, which remain today. These are the ability to treat so many injuries and diseases and carry out organ transplants in hospitals. It is these that have benefits on so many lives and will for decades to come. 
However
, if we look at some more recent developments, they have had a much greater influence than in the past.
For instance
, there is the phone, which was a significant development when invented helping many people.
However
,
although
invented many years ago, technological developments over the
last
few decades have enabled the phone to now be mobile and connected to the internet.
This
has had incredible impacts on the way people
Iive
inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
live
their lives with people using phones for so many everyday activities and for connecting around the world. In conclusion, I would argue that
although
some older technological developments are important, some new ones are too. The impacts on ordinary people’s
lives
Suggestion
lives, therefore depend
lives therefore depend
therefore
depends on the type of
technology
in question.
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