The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

The Internet is a hub of knowledge through which
one
can get anything at anytime from anywhere. As it has
tranformed
given a completely different form or appearance
transformed
the lives in a span of 30 to 40 years. Some believe that it has some negative changes, while others ponder that it has totally positive impact. I think it has more positive aspects rather than negative
one
which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will be discussing in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, advancement in net has brought some negative impact as it
increase
Suggestion
increases
the
dependance
the state of relying on or being controlled by someone or something else
dependence
of human being on it for several tasks.
In addition
, people are spending excess time on scrolling social media platforms
such
as Instagram, Whatsapp and Facebook.
which
Suggestion
Which
has filled the gap between relations. In a survey conducted by researchers, they said 70% of parents took
divource
the legal dissolution of a marriage
divorce
diverse
divorced
because of
minor issue
Suggestion
a minor issue
of chatting of their spouse with someone else and that
effect
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affect
the family in a long run.
On the contrary
, there are
plethora
Suggestion
a plethora
of positive changes which has improved the living standard of common men with the advancement of technology. As it lesser the work load at workplace and rise the
creditability
of task.
Moreover
, many things can be done
simuantanelously
at the same instant
simultaneously
as in manual way
one
has
excess
the right to enter
access
to a single task at a
time but
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time, but
in automatic he/she could perform multiple tasks. It is cost effective and time saving. To conclude,
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
has drastically altered the living in a period of
few years
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a few years
. Whether it is a negative or positive change overall has been an issue. In my opinion, it has some downside but
one
should not overlook the other side which is an important
one
to
considered
Suggestion
consider
.

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