Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

It is a very popular choice in the modern society to order ready-made
food
from the
restaurant
rather than cooking at
home
There are several reasons and major reasons are, cheap prices from
restaurant
and easy availability as it saves time from not cooking at
home
. There are certain advantages of
such
tendency, but the disadvantages should not be underestimated. On the one hand, Ordering
food
is very easy process and nowadays there are a number of apps available on mobile phones.
Moreover
, lots of restaurants give promo code for marketing and that makes the
food
cost so cheap.
Besides
this
, cooking
food
at
home
requires huge amount of time, effort and resources.
For example
cooking rice with vegetables require significant effort to cut vegetables and water and electricity or gas. Not only resources are utilised in cooking, but after
food
preparation, cleaning the complete place, and utensils are
also
huge task itself.
On the other hand
, each
restaurant
has a different process of cooking and it is not necessary
that is
completely healthy. It is well known that restaurants use chemicals, artificial colours and spices to make
food
look delicious and tasty.
Also
,
home
cooked
food
is most of the time heavy in nutritions and eventually it will lead to health benefits. Even though
restaurant
foods are delicious,
home
baked
food
has emotional value. To put
this
in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
that,
although
ordering
food
from the
restaurant
is tempted choice for busy or lazy people, but
this
approach has critical disadvantages of unhealthy
food
or not being informed about ingredients, which can be destructive in the long run for health.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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