write a letter to a organizer of annual festival which is going to organize in your place. Give feedback for last year, mention what you can do and ask some question about festival

#organizer #place #feedback #year

Dear Mr .Wilson I am writing

this

considered letter to appreciate your all your effort for the arrangement of

festival

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the festival

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last

year and make a contract for a new annual festival. Starting with the previous festival, you arranged

last

year, I was satisfied and impressed by the services and arrangements. As

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I remember the festival has taken place

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Halloween,

therefore

it was a dark and Halloween themed festival.

Moreoverl

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Moreover

, people did not have to purchase costumes because you already provided

high quality

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costumes with

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a 50

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% discount. When it comes to

this

year’s festival, there are some factors that I would like to point out.

Firstly

in contrast

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festival,

this

one is supposed to be

celebration

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a celebration

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upcoming

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the upcoming

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Nevruz which is

traditional

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holiday and

celebration

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spring

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season in Azerbaijan. For

this

reason, it would be fascinating if you could put artificial fire which would allow people to stay in

holiday

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the holiday

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mood.

Secondly

, you could include small cafes that sell baklava which is the main symbol of Nevruz. As a final point, there are a few tasks that I have already finished. To start, I have already made an agreement with an advertisement company, and they will create

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high quality and attractive ads to notify people about the special event.

In addition

recently

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launched small company will sponsor us to afford all the expenses. I am looking forward to your reply and wish your cooperation. Sincere thanks.

Alimardan

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Ali Mardan

Ahmadov.,

Submitted by eelimerdan752 on Thu Jan 09 2020

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

244 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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write a letter to a organizer of annual festival which is going to organize in your place. Give feedback for last year, mention what you can do and ask some question about festival

The Closing

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