Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?
In todays world,
Car
becomes a necessity in human life. Having car
argued to be more advantageous in comparison not owning a car
. This
essay will first
discuss advantages car
brings which is time
saving and then
discuss few disadvantages which is the maintenance and daily costs.
Firstly
, Owning a car
has many advantages and one of the most important advantages is time
saving. People who travel
a lot, spend most of his life in travelling. Although
, they travel
due to their necessity. For example
, Office goner travels from office to home and come back daily and if they use
public transport, they have to start early and come back home late as well, due to slow and time
consuming public transit. Owning a car
can solve this
problem as personal vehicle will take much less time
to commute. To illustrate, According to a survey in The Times of India, an average Indian lost 15 percent of his lifetime in travelling and having a car
can reduce this
.
On the other hand
, Car
have some drawbacks as well and one of biggest disadvantage is, It is very expensive to maintain and run a car
. If we travel
by car
it makes journey expensive compare to journey by public transits. We all know, how expensive fuel is. The more we travel
by car
, the more we have to expense on fuel. For example
, I have a car
and use
my car
for the daily commute to the office, which cost me approx 300 dollars per month for fossil fuel. Although
, if use
public transit, It will cost me a maximum of 150 dollars. Similarly
, Car
maintenance is also
expensive. A car
needs service on a regular basis, which costs a lot of money. To exemplify, my car
cost me approx 400 dollars per year on maintenance, which would be zero if I use
public transport.
To conclude, Car
brings many advantages to every individuals life, but along with this
it has many disadvantages as well. In my view, TIme
is the money and if we can save time
by using a car
, we should go with that. This
essay agrees and shows how having a car
advantages outweighed the disadvantages.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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