Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Is it improve
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Is it improving
Has it improved
Does it improve
Is it improved
Is it to improve
the general
health
rating of a community by introducing sports facilities and programs or does public
health
need to be revisited in a completely different dimension?
This
essay will discuss both perspectives
of
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on
this
controversial topic. There's no denying the fact that sports and
health
are
inter-related
reciprocally connected
interrelated
. One can even go to the extent of arguing that a person who is an
athelete
a fully developed person from maturity onward
adult
atheist
affiliate
is usually a
healtheir
improved in health or physical condition
healthier
healthy
person than a non
athelete
a person trained to compete in sports
athlete
. A stellar example of
this
correlation can be observed in the schooling days of children. In most schools across the world, where sports
is
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are
mandatory, we see that students who excel in sports as a subject are usually fit and
devioid
completely wanting or lacking
devoid
of conditions like obesity or diabetes. As a matter of fact, the number of unhealthy children is always exponentially lower than the number of unhealthy young working adults for
this
very reason.
Thus
, introducing more sports
amenties
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
ailments
, facilities and programs may lead to better public
health
in that
comminity
a group of people living in a particular local area
community
comment
. Be that it may, sports
is
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are
purely a
participational
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
participation
activity. Using the same example of school children, we can always find
abberations
an event that occurs when something passes from one state or phase to another
alterations
operations
operation
in the general
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and
participation
.
Such
children, who refuse to participate or consider limited
participation
just to get a passing grade are usually the ones who end up overweight or generally lethargic with a lower degree of
health
than their
atheletic
relating to or befitting athletics or athletes
athletic
counterparts. We can infer that even though sports is mandatory in
such
conditions,
participation
is not one
hundered
being ten more than ninety
hundred
percent. In adult life, with the many nuances of day to day work, it would be immensely more difficult to have adults participate.
Hence
,
this
is rather an issue of culture rather than that of infrastructure. China, Japan and other similar nations consider Kung - Fu, Karate and other Martial arts to be a cultural aspect of their life and it is engraved into their daily routine right from their childhoods. In my opinion,
although
sports facilities may improve public
health
to a degree, it is not a
guarentee
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantee
guaranteed
guaranty
of
participation
and eventually, may not result better
health
. A cultural
rennaissance
the revival of learning and culture
Renaissance
reconnaissance
is required, from the
grassroot
fundamental
grassroots
grass root
level of homes right to the topmost government bodies and
then
ultimately in the community to ensure a positive shift towards improving public
health
. By introducing a physical activity as
a
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an
identity of a community, one can make large strides in the domain of public
health
.

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