ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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High earnings of small group in many countries

are appears

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are appearing

appear

to be beneficial for

country

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the country's economy

country's economy

economy

, I strongly disagree with those who make

statement

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statements

the statement

a statement

by saying salaries should be in certain level.

First

of all when it comes to a

county

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county's

economy

, flow of cash makes

impact

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an impact

. People who obtain high wage are those who dealing with expensive things

such

as cars, houses, shopping and much more. For instant, a person who purchases an expensive car producing a chain benefits for those who dealing in business and for government by paying an amount of tax through those

process

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processes

, at

result

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the result

it grows the

country

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country's

economy

by those who invested in

business

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the business

On the other hand

people who are in high salaries are those who spend almost half of their life by conducting studies and professional curriculum activities to reach

high level

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a high level

for

example in

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example, in

United Kingdom

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the United Kingdom

a person who spend lots of money for studies will support the

country

by paying fees, in completion getting high salaries after getting

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

a high position and paying salary tax to

government

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the government

Meanwhile those

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Meanwhile, those

who debating on certain limitations are the one who really had bad impact

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them and those are who destroying the

country

and its

economy

. For

instant

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an instant

I had an experience while I was working in

United Kingdom

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the United Kingdom

, had college who depends

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limited salary

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a limited salary

who focus on sending money

beck

the posterior part of a human (or animal) body from the neck to the end of the spine

back

home while obtaining

job

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jobs

and spending his time in overseas, that money is

taking

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taken

out from

county

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the county

instead

of spending locally and helping

country

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the country economy

economy

to grow. In sum, I strongly believe that individuals with high salary in playing a major role in

development

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the development

country

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the country

Fri Jan 10 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

279 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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