The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided map illustrates the changes made in
road
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access to a
city
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hospital in 2007 and
in
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2010. What stands out from the map is that during
this
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time, the
City
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Hospital has seen many changes in its infrastructure. In 2007, the
City
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Hospital used to have 6
bus
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stops on both
left
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and right sides of Hospital
Road
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while
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in 2010, these
bus
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stops were removed completely.
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, the left side
were
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extended and a new
bus
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station has been constructed.
Car
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park area
used
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to serve
for
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both staff
member
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members
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and the public.
However
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, two
seperate
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separate
car
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parks were established for the use of staff and the public.
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Car
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The car
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park area
located
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is located
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on the right side of
Hospital
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the Hospital
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road
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just nearby the
busstops
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bus stops
while
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in 2010
this
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area only belonged to
car
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parking for the employees of the hospital without having any
bus
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stops.
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Second
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car
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park which served only
for
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the public located on the right
sude
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side
of
City
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Hospital along the turn to Ring
Road
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. Being the
last
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change, two roundabouts were added to both ends of Hospital
Road
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, bus, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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