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It is often argued that one should spend their spare
time
 in activities that strengthen
mind
such
 as reading and solving puzzles while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 believe that leisure
time
 should be used to relax
mind
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the mind
. In
this
 essay I will discuss both the views before reaching a conclusion.
Firstly
, with
modern era
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the modern era
 of competition, utilizing
time
 in
efficient way
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an efficient way
 is the key to success.
In other words
, using
time
 effectively in reading books will make a person more knowledgeable and will improve the vision about various things.
For instance
, my grandfather who is fond of reading and utilizes his
time
 in healthy activities is the most successful and knowledgeable person
of
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in
 our family.
Secondly
, just like good diet is essential for keeping
body
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the body
healthy
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healthy, similarly
similarly
 its essential to keep
mind
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the mind
minds
 active and healthy by activities of brain storming. If we engage our minds in puzzles and activities in which one has to stay busy our
mind
 will
work
 more effectively, and its memory will improve. To cite an example, the best therapy for people who are getting old is to recommend them to do
mind
 exercise by playing healthy games in order to prevent dementia and other diseases.
On the other hand
, engaging
mind
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minds
 in reading and healthy activities during leisure
time
 will exhaust the
mind
. The brain will not get enough
rest which
Accept comma addition
rest, which
 is essential for it to
work
 efficiently.
This
 is the reason that a lot of people are facing
burnouts
 nowadays, due to growing
work
 pressure and keeping
mind
 occupied.
For instance
, if we keep our
mind
 occupied all the
time
 it will not
work
 as effectively as when we just started using it compared to 10 hours later. So, proper
time
 should be given to
mind
 in order to rest and relax.
However
, in my opinion, utilizing your spare
time
 to get best out of it is the key to success. It
also
 makes one’s personality more attractive and charming. So, leisure
time
 should be used effectively in activities that will keep
mind
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the mind
 and body fit rather than wasting
time
 being an idol. Because
mind
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the mind
 will get enough rest anyways during the sleep of nigh
time
.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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