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Youth students exchange programmes are useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

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There is no doubt that nowadays people live in a modern world where individuals are able to find almost any kind work. Personally, I think that exchange programmes for students are quite beneficial for universities and young citizens as well. In fact, I feel
this
 way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly
, in
such
 cases a person is able to gain additional knowledge from a new place. Basically, there are plenty of unknown things in foreign countries for overseas students, but several aspects
such
 as culture and specific work experience are the most important. One should note here that traditions, customs and unique features of different areas have a great influence, because they broaden people’s mind. What is more, unique knowledge
from
Suggestion
of
 other universities and huge companies gives a bunch of valuable experience for future life and work.
As a result
, an exchange programme participant is able to become much better with the vital and specific information from abroad institutes.
Secondly
, the university itself can receive some benefits. To be more specific, visitors from other countries that do studies can be teachers as well.
For instance
, in my country all institutions of tertiary education organise the English language classes that are compulsory for everybody, so foreigners can replace local tutors for a while and teach
this
 subject as native speakers.
Consequently
, it would be extremely attractive for new students and teachers, because of new skills and abilities that they would be able to get from it. To draw the conclusion, I am of the opinion that international exchange programmes can provide plenty benefits for participants and companies as well.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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