In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, we have a common case regarding
the old
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older
people who live alone in a home with other old ones. We can say that those people need nurses and another person to look after them and off course they need specific
treatment but
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treatment, but
for that who should take
care
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of the expenditure for that. We can say that
this
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is a normal scenario when the person lives alone without anyone who
can not
can not
cannot
take
care
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of him.
For example
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, when my grandfather got
retired we
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retired, we
were living in another place and who were living alone and no one can take
care
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of him
at
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in
on
this
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sitiuation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
situations
we thought if we moved to live with him it will cost us more because of my father's job and our university
,
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,
and ethically like he was taking
care
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of all the family before his retirements and gets old we should
taking
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take
care
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of him.
Also
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, there are some people that they don't have a family and
also
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they are handicaps they couldn't pay the taxes to the governments because of their situation. So for that
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that those people have rights
on
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to
the government to support them to find
a
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an
propriate
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
place which can look after them and give them any help they need. In conclusion, We can see that we are facing a common issue and we need to work together to find a solution for
it we
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it, we
can't say that there is a specific one should solve it but we must help each other
becasue
for the reason that; on account of
because
we will face the same situation at one day.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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