Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowdays
, everyone wants to look fancy and Correct the word
Nowadays
good looking
. Add a hyphen
good-looking
Although
there is nothing wrong in
it, Most Change preposition
with
people
believe that wearing fashionable clothes
is a status symbol. However
, I feel that we shouldn't pass judgements on the basis of what someone is wearing. In this
essay
I will support my Add a comma
essay,
opinion
in detail with relevant examples. Firstly
, I believe that most people
are inspired by their favorite
stars. They tend to follow them and try to maintain Change the spelling
favourite
similar
lifestyle as them. Even my Add an article
a similar
8 year old
brother wants to wear a fancy jacket shown in Add a hyphen
8-year-old
Dhoom
movie. We can clearly see how much impact they have Correct article usage
the Dhoom
in
all age groups. The major issue Change preposition
on
arise
when the person sitting next to them may feel Change the verb form
arises
inferiority
complex. As we know, not everyone can afford to buy branded Correct article usage
an inferiority
clothes
. But, As we are surrounded by these people
, there is alot
of bad impact. Correct your spelling
a lot
Moreover
, People
have started to categorise everyone on the basis of what they are wearing. Which in my opinion
is totally wrong. For an
instance, Mark Correct article usage
apply
Zukerburg
(Founder of Facebook) wears the same Correct your spelling
Zuckerberg
color
t-shirt Change the spelling
colour
everyday
in Replace the word
every day
an
year. Correct article usage
apply
According to
me
it represents how down Add a comma
me,
to earth
he is, and we can park the Add a hyphen
to-earth
opinion
about
rich Correct word choice
that
people
wear
fashionable Wrong verb form
wearing
clothes
only. To Sum up
, Although
there is nothing bad in
following our favourite Change preposition
about
filmstars
and wearing fancy Correct your spelling
film stars
clothes
, In my opinion
, People
should keep their financial conditions in mind to avoid unnecessary debts
.Fix the agreement mistake
debt
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