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At present, science is developing quickly, but some people still have a high opinion of artists. What can the arts tell us of life that science cannot?

#science #people #artists #arts #life
In the age of technology,
science
 is
thriving rapidly
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thriving, rapidly
everyday
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every day
 and the incredible supports for human like computer, smartphone, robot and internet...
are
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Are
 undeniable.
However
,
art
 is still no less important when some people rate the value of
art
 very high. Indeed, there are some
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
from
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of
art
to
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with
of
 soul of human that
science
 never can do.
To begin
 with, music makes us feel comfortable, relieve stress,
also
 lift our emotion, help people feel cheerful.
For example
, in some researches show that playing at least one musical instrument will raise our IQ up to 3 points more.
On the other hand
, observe skill will be developed when drawer look at the objects in order to perform it again on the
art
 material.
Beside
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Besides
, the distinctive way we transfer our emotion and private view to the viewers is not like any
science
 subjects. Dance is
also
 a form of
art
, dance
follow
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follows
 the music improve
condition
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the condition
 of heart and lung, keep the body fitness, increased muscular strength, physical confident and mental functioning. Whereas,
science
do not have
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does not have
 these astonishing capability to support
human
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humans
a human
. In brief,
science
 is really essential to everyday life to heighten result in work and benefit every aspect of life.
However
, it is true that there are some values
from
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of
art
 inspire human that no
science
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scientific
 field can do.
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