People want to immigrate to rich countries. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative?

In recent times
,
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,
it is
definiatly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
true that people want to immigrate to rich countries. While
this
phenomenon has positive effects it
also
has a
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
impact. But it is necessary for us to know the reasons behind
this
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have discussed both of the effects and reasons of given.
Firstly
, as
the rich
Suggestion
the richest
country can provide
better life
Suggestion
a better life
, it is
benificiary
the recipient of funds or other benefits
beneficiary
for people to immigrate to wealthy countries.
Furthermore it
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Furthermore, it
also
gives higher wages.
Thus
, poor nation
,
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,
s
the syllable naming the fifth (dominant) note of any musical scale in solmization
so
citizens will try to move to wealthy countries for their betterment.
On the
contrary
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contrary, this
this
aspect has
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
effects too.
For example
, as immigration
increses
the country which has
higher
Suggestion
the highest
number of people moving out
from
Suggestion
of
it will
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their man and mind power. Sadly,
that is
not good for any nation.
In addition
, the citizens of rich country
also has
Suggestion
also have
have also had
to suffer from competition for
emploment
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
and degrading of
ammenities
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
. After considering all the vital aspects of immigration, one can say that immigration is
better approch
Suggestion
a better approach
better approach
the better approach
better approached
until
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
cultures
do it in a
perticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
limit. If we can curb
it
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it, then
then
it is the best
approch
move towards
approach
for the betterment of human being.
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