People want to immigrate to rich countries. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative?

#people #immigrate #countries

In recent times

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it is

definiatly

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

true that people want to immigrate to rich countries. While

this

phenomenon has positive effects it

also

has a

nagative

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

impact. But it is necessary for us to know the reasons behind

this

to a very great extent or degree

refers to the speaker or writer

have discussed both of the effects and reasons of given.

Firstly

, as

the rich

Suggestion

the richest

country can provide

better life

Suggestion

a better life

, it is

benificiary

the recipient of funds or other benefits

beneficiary

for people to immigrate to wealthy countries.

Furthermore it

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Furthermore, it

also

gives higher wages.

Thus

, poor nation

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the syllable naming the fifth (dominant) note of any musical scale in solmization

citizens will try to move to wealthy countries for their betterment.

On the

contrary

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contrary, this

this

aspect has

nagative

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

effects too.

For example

, as immigration

increses

the country which has

higher

Suggestion

the highest

number of people moving out

from

Suggestion

it will

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their man and mind power. Sadly,

that is

not good for any nation.

In addition

, the citizens of rich country

also has

Suggestion

also have

have also had

to suffer from competition for

emploment

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

and degrading of

ammenities

things that make you comfortable and at ease

amenities

. After considering all the vital aspects of immigration, one can say that immigration is

better approch

Suggestion

a better approach

better approach

the better approach

better approached

until

coutries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

cultures

do it in a

perticular

unique or specific to a person or thing or category

particular

limit. If we can curb

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it, then

then

it is the best

approch

move towards

approach

for the betterment of human being.

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