We can not help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often argued that assisting all needy people around the world is quite challenging, so the best way is to focus on an effort to make our own societies and countries better. I completely disagree with
this
opinion and think that it is essential to give aid to other international friends.
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First
of all, I believe that we all should be helpful to each other including those who live beyond our national borders. Linking Words
This
is because we are all human beings and inhabitants living together on Earth. Linking Words
Today many
worldwide organizations have been formed to support deprived people from different countries. Accept comma addition
Today, many
For instance
, United Way is a nonprofit organization that identify and resolve pressing community issues.
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Secondly
, economically abundant countries should contribute more to help other poor nations in various aspects. Linking Words
This
is because they are partly Linking Words
reponsible
for the indigent worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
countries's
predicament since, historically, those advanced countries have exploited natural resources and human Suggestion
country's
labor
for their own benefit. a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
Thus
, they are required to compensate for current economic difficulties of undeveloped countries. Linking Words
For example
, famine and diseases in African countries Linking Words
is becoming
more and more severe, leading to many horrendous consequences. Government and individuals in developed countries can save life simply by sharing the advanced technology and supporting financially.
In conclusion, I agree that we should all pay attention not only to our own communities but other international friends too. We should do our best to assist others and national boundaries can not stop us from helping those who are in need.Suggestion
are becoming
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite