The urban transport system receives more funds compared to rural transport system. Why do you think it so? How can it be solved?

Nowadays with
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Nowadays, with
an incredible increase in population growth in the
citie
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
city
cities
, people need to utilize the public
transport
system
more than ever. In cities, there are many factors that impact the traffic issue. The student and employees go to their own destination at the same time. Some people prefer using their own cars, so Streets will become full of cars with single drivers. If people continue using their own cars
then
we can no longer live in developed cities because of air pollution. The use of bicycles had decreased dominantly in the
last
decades. And most people work very far from their own living area, some people work in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
cities, so they have to transfer a lot of distance to reach their work. These all cause traffic problems at working hours in cities. So, for solving these serious problems in cities, people encourage using the public
transport
system
instead
of using their own car, but it remains an unsolved critical issue in big cities. The government allocates the huge budget for an urban
transport
system
to solve
this
problem. Because of
the lower
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the low
population and
also
good weather in rural areas, people’s need
to
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for
the public
transport
system
is very lower than cities and in some part, you cannot find any public
transport
system
to use and it is not good. It is rational that lower budget allocates to rural areas
for
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of
transportation but
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transportation, but
I think that governments can handle
this
issue much better if they refuse some in vain expenses and allocate the charges to main items in countries. I believe that all the people in the country must have the same facilities and appropriate style of living and if the government adds facilities to small cities and the rural area most of the serious problems in the city will be solved
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