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Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think has changed the way we worked? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

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In today's, Business sectors,
technology
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has become
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have become
 more popular.
This
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 essay will discuss how modern
technology
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 changed the
work
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 and considered the demerits of using
technology
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. By using modern technologies
our
plural of "I"
we
 live in performing our jobs
more faster
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faster
 than before. Nowadays, using computer has helped people in performing their jobs in less than less time.
For instance
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, In the past, people used to dig
by
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with
 their hands by taking 1 or 2
days but
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days, but
 in today's world due to the
technology
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 people complete their
work
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 in 1 or 2 hours.
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, using the modern
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 has changed our
work
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 by
permorming
the performance of a part or role in a drama
performing
 the job or
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 in less time.
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, using the modern
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 has
also
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 some disadvantages. People become more lazy in doing their jobs.
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, for the calculation of simple thing they are using technologies
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 as, calculators and mobiles. They cannot
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with out
in absence of
without
technology
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. People are relying
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 much on
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 and computers
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 making them slow and lazy. In conclusion, the
technology
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 is widespread in many countries. It has given business success and expand in a way. I recommend that the use of
technology
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 in today's world is very important to save time and
work
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 faster despite some disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • remote work
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • collaboration
  • communication tools
  • data management
  • cybersecurity
  • job displacement
  • technical failures
  • work-life balance
  • innovation
  • digital transformation
  • vulnerability
  • skill development
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