Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think has changed the way we worked? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

In today's, Business sectors,
technology
has become
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have become
more popular.
This
essay will discuss how modern
technology
changed the
work
and considered the demerits of using
technology
. By using modern technologies
our
plural of "I"
we
live in performing our jobs
more faster
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faster
than before. Nowadays, using computer has helped people in performing their jobs in less than less time.
For instance
, In the past, people used to dig
by
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with
their hands by taking 1 or 2
days but
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days, but
in today's world due to the
technology
people complete their
work
in 1 or 2 hours.
Therefore
, using the modern
technology
has changed our
work
by
permorming
the performance of a part or role in a drama
performing
the job or
work
in less time.
On the other hand
, using the modern
technology
has
also
some disadvantages. People become more lazy in doing their jobs.
For example
, for the calculation of simple thing they are using technologies
such
as, calculators and mobiles. They cannot
work
with out
in absence of
without
technology
. People are relying
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
much on
technology
and computers
that is
making them slow and lazy. In conclusion, the
technology
is widespread in many countries. It has given business success and expand in a way. I recommend that the use of
technology
in today's world is very important to save time and
work
faster despite some disadvantages.
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