Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Along with the globalization, people are able to buy some products where ever they live. I believe

this

situation has more positive impacts than negative one's. The foremost effects of products become widespread in every country is

opportunity

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an opportunity

for locals to expand their business dramatically. Advertisement is much

more easier

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easier

now than it is ever before, with the help of social media.

For example

, people can start

their business small

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their small business

in their home town and

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Explore

the market in different countries by utilizing the availability of the İnternet and various social media platforms. Another major impact of the globalization is

increasement

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encased

encasement

in employment sectors. There has

arised

come into existence; take on form or shape

arisen

different types of Jobs for the need of transporting

goods

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goods such as

such

as in shipping and cargo industry. Many people around the

world

now employed in these areas and serve their customers conveniently.

However

, expansion of brands

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in

the

world

has

created pressing

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created a pressing

problem which is affordability. Underdeveloped countries' citizens could not able to afford to purchase these expensive, import products with their relatively worthless currency.

In addition

,

young

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younger

generations in these lower-class countries still like to have these goods of

famous

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the famous

-global brands. So, an alarming issue occurs

here espacially

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here, especially

here especially

here specially

for parents. To conclude, in

modern

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the modern world

a modern world

world

, trade has

growth

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grown

significantly and most of the brands has

became

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become

popular amongst

world

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the world

.

Although

, it seems positive aspects of the globalization which are opportunity of the expansion of businesses and

increasement

in employment

outweight

be heavier than

outweigh

to

negative side

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the negative side

of the problem

(

Accept space

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affordability), there is still a remarkable poor effect of

this

situation.