Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievement and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is seemed that most of the artists are being popular for their attraction and riches while it should be seen through their accomplishment, for giving a good figure to the adolescent. I partially agree with
this
statement which I will explain in Linking Words
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following paragraph.
On the one hand, in Linking Words
this
contemporary world, there are various sophisticated things Linking Words
such
as gadget which could affect the immature persons through its widespread information of entertainment. Linking Words
This
will reflect unpleasant sample for them, since, some news is usually informing unsuitable matter for their age. Linking Words
Thus
, they know that how to be a famous is only by performing their charming and wealth Linking Words
that is
truly wrong idea. As an entertainer, many aspects that should be considered properly to perform their talent, Linking Words
for instance
, receiving a reward annually for their best acting could motivate younger to effort their future. Linking Words
Besides
, they Linking Words
also
could be having a right attitude by giving a donation to either reform or charitable institution.
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On the other hand
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although
they have a great emission, it is better to spend it for the philanthropy Linking Words
instead
of private necessity. Linking Words
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conversely
, some artists are likely to show their wealth through their glamour and branded accessories, items and accomodation in some cases. Linking Words
As a result
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this
will lead to the controversial issues among society and impact to the discrepancy social. The probability is that their figure is on the top which will be easily affecting most people especially to the teenagers. Whereas, they should have a proper mind as well as best public figure to build a great concept for their Linking Words
next
steps to reach their dream. Linking Words
This
can not be assured that the celebrities could give a good example for them.
By way of conclusion, it is true that showing a good behaviour is pivotal things for the youthful to be a good individual. From my viewpoint, it is most agreeable to the entertainment company for leading the artists to be more polite and altruistically in front of the public due to the uncontrollable emotional of younger.Linking Words
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