Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a common knowledge that entertainers

such

as film stars, singers, athletes, and movie directors are one of the highest paid people in the world. Some think that

this

is unfair as these jobs do not account for the six figure number

paychecks

usually paid for them.

However

, I disagree with

this

point of view and will explain the reasons in the essay below. Famous people are talented individuals who have dedicated their whole lives to hone their talent. Most of these A-stars will divulge that the secret to their success is a rigid training schedule that made them miss countless birthday parties, weekend outings, and summer vacations. Serena Williams, the famous American tennis player, once mentioned that she used to train for four hours, seven days a week ever since she was five years old.

That is

the level of

committment

the trait of sincere and steadfast fixity of purpose

commitment

these people invest in their careers, and I think

this

dedication and sacrifice of a normal childhood is priceless.

On the other hand

, some critics would argue that there are far more noble jobs that are grossly underpaid

such

as teaching and counselling.

Moreover

, these

job

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jobs

have a crucial purpose of shaping the minds of future generations.

Although

these claims are understandable,

this

does not undermine the fact that fame comes with a tremendous sacrifice of

perosnal

concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality

personal

live

go away from a place

leave

.

For example

, most of these entertainers have their lives splashed in

tabloids

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the tabloids

or constantly followed by

papparazzi

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paparazzi

and zealous fans. In conclusion, being famous comes at a great price of both physical training and personal freedom;

thus

, it is only fair for individuals involved to be highly paid.

This

does not diminish the unfairness of the fact that there are jobs

such

as the ones involved in education that are hugely underpaid.