Countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other type of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree

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It is believed by many that the financial aid received by developing countries from developed Nations is a major form of assistance,

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other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

school of thought have been able to counter

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opinion stating that other forms of assistance

supersedes

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supersede

that of monetary gains, I am of the opinion that there is more to development than money

hand-out

an announcement distributed to members of the press in order to supplement or replace an oral presentation

handouts

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, the help received by these underdeveloped countries are not usually accounted for resultantly, used for what it was intended. Most of the funds have been known to be embezzled by their top leaders

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leaving the financed project unattended.

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, monies meant for developmental projects are being channeled to other uses which will not yield the desired results.

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, the ETFund (Educational Trust Fund)

project which

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project, which

was given to Nigeria by UNICEF was misappropriated by the

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leaders.

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, the elimination of poverty can only occur organically and any attempt to eradicate it with an

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method will only prove abortive. Several political scientists have

analyzed

examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts

analysed

the effects of top-down approach in solving the menace poverty, and they have discovered that the only lasting solution is a bottom-top approach which involves efforts

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as, developmental projects- the construction of roads and bridges, opening their border to allow products from

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-world countries-

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in turn will improve the GDP (Gross Domestic Product) of these African Nations. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that monetary aid from Advanced Nations to Poor Countries have proved to be ineffective over time. And as

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, other forms of assistance like opening the border and allowing African products into their shores, awarding contracts that UNICEF is popular for and ensuring Foreign Direct Investments are better alternatives to financial aid.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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