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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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In the
last
 recent years, the development of big countries has influenced the increase of
immigration
. The fact is that,
this
 massive change has a profound implications on
society
, which I am going to shed some light on. The
first
 and foremost effect is that being caused by moving young generation is that the countries with less advancement have lost their
work
 force.
For example
, in my own
country
 we get a lot of immigrations due to the economical, educational situations, so
this
 has affected the growth of leaving.
In addition
 to
this
, my hometown is getting emptier of youth labour each and every day, which is not an acceptable way for workers and businesses.
Also
, the senior generation is striving to fill
this
 lack,
however
, they are not able to
work
 full time or for the rest of their life.
On the other hand
,
immigration
 can have benefits for youngsters and
also
society
. Undoubtedly, if
society
 supports children to extend their education in other developed countries and give them the opportunity of working in high rank business in their own
country
 after their graduation. Not only it will be a great chance for juniors to study and get to
work
 in their own
country
, but it
also
 has a major impact on
society
.
Moreover
, the
country
 gets to have highly educated force from all over the world,
additionally
 people would not consider
immigration
 and we get to take back our
work
 force.
Furthermore
,
this
 idea of a temporary
immigration
 owing to having a better education and information may cause the advancement of
third
 world countries. In conclusion, settling completely to other countries has perilous influence on the
society
,
although
 the temporary one, which can help
society
 to grow will benefit both people and associations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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