These days people in some countries living in a "throw-away" society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away .what do you think are the causes and what problems are caused by this trend ?
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people
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lack of proper waste management in mega citiesAccept space
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population
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the population
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act of peoplemarked by lack of attention or consideration or forethought or thoroughness; not careful
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chocked
into dusts where different kinds of microorganisms throw carelessly
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viruses and parasites can easily grow and spreadAccept space
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resulted in an unhealthy lifestyle and an ugly city picture.Suggestion
the government
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