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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#libraries #alternatives
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Nowadays there are much better ways to read other than going to a library, but it doesn’t justify that libraries should close. In my
opinion there
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opinion, there
are
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 a unique value that still people seek. As the technology develops things like reading become simple and smarter every day. You can read any book, newspaper or article online while on the go, because everything is now connected through internet. As an example, anyone can buy a book online and read it on your mobile or you can deliver it to your house. University students benefit from
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 as it saves time.
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 reading becomes
digitalized
put into digital form, as for use in a computer
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digitized
 and easily accessible, some prefer going to a public or university library because there are still old books and articles that not electronically available. It’s true that it takes a lot of effort
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for
into
 an old book to be available digitally. Some believe reading in a library makes them concentrate better, while reading
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 your home makes distractions.
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Most
 senior persons
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like
 libraries other than reading online, mainly they are less familiar with
technology
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the technology
. As a
student I
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student, I
 believe the libraries should be kept and well maintained because some old books and articles only available in certain libraries while newer books available electronically. In my opinion libraries should be kept while the technology evolve as there will be some percentage of community that still prefer it over the digital reading, so that everyone can benefit from reading regardless of the medium they use.

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