Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Universities have to make it easier, especially for the students from poor families or students live in rural areas and
such
groups find it difficult to get a
university
education
. I completely agree with the idea because get a
university
education
is every
student
’s dream. It’s not a secret that
government universities
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government, universities
have the toughest
selection
mechanism. Not only a
student
have
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has
to pass
advanced level examination
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an advanced level examination
the advanced level examination
from school, but
also
he
have
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has
to get
certain level
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a certain level
of grades and a
university
selection
score called “Z Score”. Even though you get good grades your
university
selection
will depend on your “Z Score”. As an example, if you have
certain score level
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a certain score level
certain score levels
the certain score level
that illegible for
university
application that doesn’t mean you can get admission from your nearest government
university
. Specially for students from poor family background or from rural areas find
this
very difficult because they have to leave their home town and move to a different location until your
university
education
complete. Another issue that discourage students from
such
groups is
university
accommodation is not sufficient to
full
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fully
fill all the students and often they have to find nearby boarding houses or flats and that makes
student
expense
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expenses
rise up. Even though you get free
education
from the universities scenarios like
this
will increase the weight of the
student
families. I believe universities have to make certain changes to the
student
selection
process while improving their accommodation capacity. Lowering the
selection
score and allow students to get admission from nearby universities make big relief
on
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to
for
students from
such
groups. As a
student
myself I
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myself, I
agree that
university
education
should available not only for students from middle or high-class family
backgrounds but
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backgrounds, but
also
from poor and rural areas so that every person can benefit from
university
education
equally.
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