Nowadays, the media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree?

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but there is a part of society as well which believes that the mass media only focuses on broadcasting problems and emergencies than the advancement. I personally do not advocate

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perspective as there are many evidences which are in favour of media. It is universally accepted that the development and knowledge brought by m

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the media

is assisting us everywhere. One can be aware about upcoming detrimental situations nearby, if

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news will be flashed on televisions or other broadcasting sources. Even, the people can raise their awareness about how to encounter

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difficult circumstances. Ideal example here can be supermarkets and congested busy places, where p

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, if an accident occurs somewhere and different media is broadcasting the news, police will take swift action there, so there will not be any traffic jams or chaos among other drivers.

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, other commuters can change their way to home or work while travelling to avoid delays.

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, a better and safe environment will be created for common man to live if media puts more emphasis on the negative aspect of society, as many actions will be taken to eradicate the related problems. After taking everything into consideration,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

297 words

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Nowadays, the media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree?

Fully explain your ideas

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the cause and effects of this disturbing trend

Some people say that a person's success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that students benefit greatly from going to private secondary schools, but others assert that private secondary schools have a negative impact on the young generation and the society alike. Discuss both views.