There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to you to know that I am very dissatisfied with your
bus
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service. I am talking about a
bus
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number 777 which should arrive
on
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bus
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the bus
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stop at 7:30 am in
morning
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the morning
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at Bridge Street, Wentworth.
However
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,
this
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bus
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comes late to the above by around 30 minutes from
last
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few weeks. I do not have my own vehicle.
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I only rely on public transport. I study
in
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Southern Cross University, at Parramatta. In order to reach my university, I
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need to catch
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bus
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the bus
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and
then
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train. But when the above
bus
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comes late than its expected time I always miss my train and
thus
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I get late
to
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my university. I want to give some
suggestion
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to resolve the above problem. Please add an extra
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service during
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time and alternatively please add
GPS
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a GPS
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device in your buses so for
us
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we
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to know the right location of the
bus
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so passengers may arrange their trips according to their urgency. Hope to hear from you soon. Thanks, Pooja

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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