Government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In the modern world, there are two prominent mode of
transport
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that is
roads and railways which are more important for every Linking Words
humans
. It is Suggestion
human
common notion
that governmental bodies should squander more on rail Suggestion
a common notion
transport
than roadways. Because Use synonyms
tarin
create by training and teaching
train
transportation
provides better facilities and Use synonyms
also
it is crucial for Linking Words
expansion
of Suggestion
the expansion
economics
growth of the country. As far as my concerns, I totally agree with the motion that government should more focusing on Suggestion
economic
economical
development
of railway Use synonyms
infrastructural
facilities than Suggestion
road
due to various reasons. In Use synonyms
this
essay will discuss why spending on railways are Linking Words
significant
than roads and will conclude Suggestion
more significant
this
with clear opinion.
Why expansion of railways are more considerable than Linking Words
road
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transport
? There are several benefits Use synonyms
by
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of
from
development
of train facilities. Use synonyms
Firstly
, it is Linking Words
cheaper mode
of commuting and Suggestion
a cheaper mode
therefore
it Linking Words
is play
a pivotal role Suggestion
is playing
has played
plays
for
the lower and upper middle class sectoral travel segment. Suggestion
in
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, railways Linking Words
contributes
to Suggestion
contribute
major proportion
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a major proportion
in
GDP through employment generation and Suggestion
of
frieght
collection. In India, recent research about the growth of country shows that 55% of employment opportunities has increased due to the expansion of goods carried by a large vehicle
freight
railway system
. Suggestion
the railway system
railway systems
a railway system
In addition
to these, the social cost in terms of environmental damage or degradation Linking Words
are
significantly lower in Suggestion
is
rail
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real
other mode
of Suggestion
other modes
an other mode
transport
. Adding to transparency will Use synonyms
also
help Linking Words
on
assessing the profitability and contribution towards Suggestion
in
with
development
on the whole.
It is undeniable fact that Use synonyms
road
needs less investment as Use synonyms
compare
to train Suggestion
compared
transport
and it enables door to door services. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
inspite
of these merits, Suggestion
in spite
road
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transportation
has some major limitations. Use synonyms
First
of all, Linking Words
road
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transport
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are
unstable and unequal, and casualties are more due to the Suggestion
is
road
accidents which is a major Use synonyms
drawbacks
. In China, Suggestion
drawback
for instance
, the Linking Words
road
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accidents
survey shows 45% of serious injuries Suggestion
accident
occure
come to pass
occur
occurred
by
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from
road
accidents and over 30% were met death due to the same. Another Use synonyms
demerits
of it is, in modern Suggestion
demerit
times
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time
road
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transportation
system has negative impact on Use synonyms
environment
. Building the Suggestion
the environment
road
require melting of tar or formulation of concrete, which may harm the associated environment. Use synonyms
Moreover
, emissions from vehicles Linking Words
are not only have
an adverse Suggestion
are not only having
have not only had
effects
on human health, it is a serious threat to global warming.
To conclude the essay, we have discussed why train Suggestion
effect
transportation
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are
more beneficial and government should more focus on it than roadways. In my opinion, I totally agree with Suggestion
is
this
that government must Linking Words
determined
to railway Suggestion
determine
infrastructural
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development
in Use synonyms
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to expand economic growth and enhancement of climate conditions.(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
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