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It is generally believed some people are born with certain talents, for instant for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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There is an argument that children can be learned and performed as like talented people. Even though, people are born with talent do better than taught person, from my vantage point, I highly believe that humans can be trained. On the one hand, many people say that some talents like sport or music is gifted to some special people since they were born, so most ordinary people cannot be like them.
To begin
 with, Thomas Edison said "the genius is made by 99percents of effort and 1percent
of
Suggestion
to
 inspire" but normal people cannot have that 'the 1percent' usually.
In addition
, people who have the special gift, they only need shorter training than usual man.
As a result
, talented people train same time with ordinary people, they are faster
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 others.
For example
, we can see
this
 in the story of Mozart and Salieri.
On the other hand
, some believe that ordinary people can be trained and do as special people.
Firstly
, most number of people in the world are not born with talent but they made good result as gifted people, sometimes better than them.
For example
, a Korean star football
player
 named 'Ji-sung Park' was not
very good
Suggestion
a very good player
player
 when he was young,
however
, now he is the most valuable
player
 in the history of Korea with his efforts and hard training.
Secondly
, if only born talented people can be a star, which bring
tryless
the act of testing something
trials
treeless
 world, because nobody want to try anything,
Lastly
, everyone
do not need
Suggestion
does not need
 to be a superstar, if everyone is
superstar
Suggestion
a superstar
, there is no superstar at all. In conclusion,
although
 talented people to be a high level
player
 easily, in my point of view, I convinced that anyone can be good with training.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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