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Some universities offer online courses for students. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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These days, an online class has become widely popular and attractive in studying, especially for the scholar of colleges.
Therefore
, the numerous universities are providing an online classes for learning as an alternative, sources of studying in traditional classrooms.
This
 essay will analyse the pros and cons of attending an online class. There are a number of advantages that come along with choosing an online learning.
Firstly
, studying an online path, it provides a flexible timing and convenient learning for pupil because, it allows them to learn their desirable subject on their appropriate time.
This
 will help them to pursue knowledge and skills, staying in their own house.
Secondly
, online sessions will be more helpful for those students who lives far away from their college. For an instance, a student who wants to pass entrance examination does not have to go tuition,
instead
 he can go to an online preparation area without going to of home.
Hence
, more the student tends to choose an online learning method rather than going to the classroom field. Even thought, online course has some merit, there are a few challenges that come with
this
 phenomenon. The main disadvantage of
this
 is that it makes less direct interaction between the teacher and learner.
For example
, graduate students will not get sufficient mentoring by teachers and they need to rely on only written communication which directly lead to few motivation and counselling.
Moreover
, many learners prefer traditional classroom as an effective method for learning subjects. In conclusion, several universities created online curriculum the
second
 choice for students.
However
,
this
 trend has prone and con. In my opinion, studying online is the best way for rapid progress and the betterment of the disciple.(280)
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