Studies have shown that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, based on a great number of surveys, the

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a growth in strength or number or importance

rise

of

crime

rate is approximated to the deficiency of well-educated foundation. Many individuals claim that educating prisoners

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the most effective way to prevent criminals,

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it makes a chance for them to be workers after they are released. Honestly,

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leans on toward escalating the role of education in

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a sentence

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. To educate people committing a

crime

in prison is clearly reasonable, because

this

manner is an early intervention to crimes’

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

that musters them to fix up their awareness and not re-offend in the future. When people turn to crimes, it means that they lack of caring and educating from their parents.

Therefore

, with the offenders’ training schedule, after being served in prison by confinement, crimes will be thoroughly taught about gaining the basic mortality in society, looking toward to the positive things in life, or working in simple jobs, to gradually reintegrate

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into

society and stay away from criminals.

As a result

, crimes are manageable and the incidence of

crime

rate is reduced. Moving on to another aspect, despite being educated or trained by prisoners’ institution, it is not certain that offenders will be accepted to be back in

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the offices

. The primary explanation is that in some cases, each offender is still discriminated due to their unreliable background, especially those who work with them.

Besides

that, in some countries, their governments do not bring out vital policies to assist prisoners to gather in society,

such

as the policy about accommodations, occupations or even financial supports.

Finally

, there is an anticipation that individuals who just come out of

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the sentence

probably commit again, due to their innate

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

of

crime

, the failure of parenting styles

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their parents to supervise them, or their low maturity to avoid social temptations; so that, prisoners are able to re-offend more serious crimes than before.

Consequently

, education program in prison is not an ideal solution. In conclusion, education for offenders plays a crucial role in

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preventing

people from embarking

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a life of

crime

and controlling the

crime

rate.

However

, whether it succeeds in making people become compatible to communities or not depends on the co-operation of others,

such

as government and parents.