Some people think developing countries should invite large foreign companies to open offices and factories to grow their economies. other think developing Countries should keep the large companies out and develop local companies instead. Discuss both views
welcoming
new ideas And Suggestion
Welcoming
trade
via developed Countries is a healthy way to exchange Culture and innovation of some new ideas. Inviting foreign Companies to expand their buisness
has always been debatable and now it has become more controversial. a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
whereas
Critics Suggestion
Whereas
thinks
that local Companies should Suggestion
think
given
priority to Suggestion
give
prosperous thier
Suggestion
their prosperous
prosperous their
buisness
and company. In a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
this
essay we will have discussion
regarding both sides of Suggestion
a discussion
fence
.
Critics agree that giving foreign Companies Suggestion
the fence
previlage
to set up their a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privilege
privileges
privileged
trade
And factories will boost their economies to rest at back door
. In Suggestion
the back door
this
way all the less known local factories will not only be dominated by developed foreign Companies but also
will be easily taken over with time. Moreover there
will be Accept comma addition
Moreover, there
lack
of growth and infrastructure will fall Suggestion
a lack
down thereby
Collapsing all the coal Accept comma addition
down, thereby
buisness
. To illustrate domestic cloth Companies nowadays have been Completely a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
over taken
by foreign brands. catch up with and possibly overtake
overtaken
youngsters
are Completely Swayed by branded Clothes leading demolishing of local cloth Companies, Suggestion
Youngsters
hence
fall down of economy.
on
the other hand, many minded people faster Suggestion
On
this
thinking and even I am in Stand with this
that all the developing nations should acknowledge the foreign Companies to Commence new offices and factories. This
practice will not only benefit developed
Countries to grow their Suggestion
developers
developer
economy but
will Accept comma addition
economy, but
also
boost the trade
and Competition among developing Countries as well. As a
result to
Compete with them local Companies will have to work Accept comma addition
result, to
more hard
and bring up with ample amount of new ideas And technique for Suggestion
harder
sake
of their survival Suggestion
the sake
in
market. Suggestion
into
furthermore
, intermixing of local and foreign Companies and factories will Allow us to share more rich foreign Culture and tradition. in addition
Furthermore
This
will inturn
bind society into one bead and feeling of brotherhood will strengthen the bond between two.
In conclusion, to harmonise the above debate it is necessary government should Come into action and take necessary action. It should only allow some factories or Suggestion
in turn
trade
to setup
its base Suggestion
set up
instead
of welcoming each And every bind of company
. Suggestion
the company
we
should only Suggestion
We
incest
those Company whom we think will benefit make an investment
invest
insist
as
in The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
near future
. In Suggestion
the near future
this
way it will not only promote trade
but will also
stop Unnecessary hoppers to establish their roots in developing Countries.Submitted by yashvardhan18717 on
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