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today more and more tourist are visiting places were conditions are difficult,such as sahara desert and antartica.what are the benifit and disadvantage for tourist who visit such places.

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in
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In
 a
mellineal
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millennial
 year there are
increase
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an increase
increases
 in the number of
traveller
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travellers
 willing to explore.They
likes
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like
 excitement
,
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,
trilled and intend to be more adventurous.Mostly
fasinated
having your attention fixated as though by a spell
fascinated
 in visiting places that are arduous
such
 as Sahara Desert or Antartica. The foremost
benifit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
 of travelling to places with difficult conditions is having
new experience
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new experiences
a new experience
 about the place.What's new in the eyes is something
good relieves
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good, relieves
 stress and bring happiness.Knowing about
their enviroment how
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their environment, how
their environment how
 they cope up with the harsh
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
 because both have extreme weather temperature the one is very hot while the other one is below zero degree very cold.No sight could replace the beauty of nature.The glazer form by zero temperature.
Dont
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Don't
under estimate
assign too low a value to
underestimate
 the extreme coldness without proper clothing and long exposure could cause your body part.Frostbite comes with that
,
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,
hollow ground that will drop
you
of you or yourself
your
 way below and the polar bear that always searching for food. While on the hand
,
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,
danger
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the danger
 that lies in the place. Sahara is hot it can give traveller be dehydrated
,
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,
body shock
,
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,
body shock
were
In or at or to what place
where
 heat can cause
increase
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increases
 in blood pressure and hypertension.
Their
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There
 are lots of venomous crawler like scorpion
,
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,
spiders and
snake which
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snakes, which
snakes which
a snake which
the snake which
 could be fatal.
Sinkhole
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A sinkhole
are
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is
 to be found
on
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in
 some
areas its
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areas, it's
areas it's
 a
lifr
a characteristic state or mode of living
life
lift
 threatening. I
never been
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have never been
never was
 in Sahara Desert nor
Antartica but
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Antartica, but
 on my foremost opinion travelling to places with difficult condition like Sahara Desert and Antartica is difficult in term of
weather especially
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weather, especially
 it can be the awareness about the effect of climate change that are happening in
this
 part of the world.And it could be highly dangerous too.There's a beauty and danger in everything so
its
it is
it's
 up to everyone to keep in safe.

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