The Internet and television are giving more opportunities for the average person to become famous. It is positive or negative development?
In the digital age, people are becoming famous easily with the assistance of the internet and television. From my point of view,
this
phenomenon has both upside and downside but it is likely to cause more negative consequence than positive ones.
Admittedly, being famous could bring numerous fancy things Linking Words
such
as admiration, money, expensive lifestyle and Linking Words
powerful
to individuals. Suggestion
power
Firstly
, a popular personality will have a fan – base (the fans of a singer, group, or team considered as a group) that are willing to share the same happiness and sadness with his or her. Obviously, the greatest advantage of being a celebrity is being a wealthy person. Money assists famous people in living in beautiful mansions or houses with servants and buying everything they want. Linking Words
Moreover
, celebrities could receive special treatment everywhere they go Linking Words
such
as special tables at restaurants, special seats at Linking Words
theaters
, or others.
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
On the contrary
, the famous is not as gorgeous as which in people’s imagination. Obviously, celebrities will have no privacy; Linking Words
for example
, every detail about them, their family or their love life could be the talk of the town. Linking Words
In addition
, famous people could be followed by a stalker who will follow them, bother them, or break into their house. Linking Words
Furthermore
, celebrities always have to behave perfectly and if they make a small mistake, they will be judged and criticized by abundant of person. Linking Words
This
situation could put them at risk of pressure and have a mental illness.
All things considered, fame is not fabulous and people have to trade plentiful things to be famous. Linking Words
Therefore
, it is better to be the average person because fame could cause negative consequence.Linking Words
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