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Question: Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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HOW MUCH
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 SHOULD BE COLLECTED IT THE BUGGEST DISCUSSED TOPIC NOWADAYS IN EACH AND EVERY COUNTRY. CERATIN FOLKS ARGUE THAT WHAT EVER SALARY WE OWNED
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 OUR PROPERTY, AND INDIVIDUAL ONLY HAS RIGHT TO KEEP THAT WITH HIM RATHER THAN PAYING BACK TO THE REGIME IN THE FORM OF
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. FISRTLY,
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 ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY CERTAIN PEOPLE DO NOT WANT TO REMUNERATION
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 AND
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, HOW PAYING
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 ON TIME WOULD CONTRIBUTE TO MAKE OUR TERRITORY'S ECONOMY STRONGER.
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, THE FOLLOWING ESSAY WILL TOTALLY OPPOSE AND SUPPORT IN THE FAVOR OF PAYING
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 AS RESPONSIBLE CIVILIAN. ON THE ONE HAND, HARD WORK OF FOLKS MAKE THEM FEEL BAD WHEN THEY HAVE TO GIVE SOME OF THE MONEY FROM THEIR SALARY TO THE TERRITTORY. THEY THINK IT IS A RESULT OF THEIR DEDICATION, PASSION AND SLEEPLESS NIGHTS. IF THEY REIMBURSEMENT
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 THEY UNABLE TO FULLY SUPPORT THEIR FAMILY FINANCIALLY.
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, THEY DO NOT LIKE REIMBURSEMENT TAXEX TO THE AUTHORITY.
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,
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 MIGHT AFFECT THE GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT OF THE GOVERNMENT.
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, AS PER THE CANADIAN GOVERNMENT RULE, EVERYONE HAS TO REIMBURSEMENT 14% OF THEIR SALARY WHICH IS NOT SUFFICIENT FOR THE PERSON TO SURVIVE WITH THE INCREADED INFLATION. ON THE OTHER SIDE, THE PRIME REASON BEHIND PAYING
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 IS THE REVOLUTION OF THE COUNTRY IN VARIOUS FIELD AS THE AUTHORITY USED TO HAVE ENOUGH MONEY TO BRING SOME CHANGES IN THE NATION. SO WHEN WE
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 MONEU TO THE REGIME, THEY RARE ABLE TO COOPERATE WITH EVOLUTION OF THE NATION.
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, AS PER THE INDIAN GOVERNMENT RULE, WHEN WE REMUNERATION FULL
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 THE IMPOVERISHED PEOPLE ARE ABLE TO GET HELP IN SEVERAL SECTORS LIKE FOR STUDIES, MEDICAL TREATEMENT AND SO ON.
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 IS POSSIBLE BECAUSE 70% OF THE INDIAN CITIZENS
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 TAXEX ON TIME.
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, THE INDIA IS NOW CONSIDERED AS DEVELOPED AND EDUCATED NATION AROUND THE GLOBE. IN CONCLUSION,
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 INDEED HELP EVERYONE IN SOME OF THE WAY.
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, IS IS IMMPOSIBLE FOR SOME LPWER CLASS FAMILY TO
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, SO I BELIEVE, THERE SHOULD BE SOME RUL WHERE THEY HAVE OPTION TO SELECTED HOPW MUCH THEY WANT TO
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 BACK TO THE REGIME AS PER THEIR FINANCIAL ABILITY.
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 WAY, MAY BE 905 CIVILIAN AGREE TO
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 WITHOUT ANY HESSITATION.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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