some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly with. Consider both sides of this debates and present your own idea. You should give reasons for your answer and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience
There have been arguments on whether or not it is beneficial for secondary
school
leavers to spend a year
at home before proceeding to higher institution. While some individuals perceive it is a productive idea to give students time to build other passion
they have,
it is totally opposed by others thinking it will have Accept space
,
negative impact
on their grades especially in Suggestion
a negative impact
first
Suggestion
the first year
year
in the university
. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
On the one hand,
staying back for about 12 months after high Accept space
,
school
gives opportunity to students. This
is because they can have this
period to build other passion
and abilities they have which is able to make them stand out among their peers during university
education. For example
, I discovered I have passion
for fabric design which I was able to achieve by enrolling in fashion Suggestion
a passion
school
after secondary education. This
opened doors of opportunities for me and served as extra source
of income.Suggestion
an extra source
Hence
,
Accept space
,
this
idea believed by certain persons to be have positive effect
on children.
Suggestion
a positive effect
On the other hand
, this
act is said to have notable negative impact
on students' output in Suggestion
a notable negative impact
year
one. The reason being that there is risk of shifting their focus from education and also
reducing their mental capacity while waiting. To illustrate, a research conducted by some lecturers on success rate
of student after Suggestion
the success rate
first session
in Suggestion
the first session
university
found out that most of the students with low grades were those who didn't enter university
immediately after high school
.Therefore
,
some people feel Accept space
,
this
act gives students draw backs
.
In conclusion, I believe that both sides have their merits. the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
However
, on balance, I tend to believe that it is more beneficial for children to spend about a year
after secondary school
building other passion
they have to make them outstanding.Submitted by christianaokunade on
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