You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet. However you could not make it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: express your apology why you could not meet making arrangement to meet him.

Dear Samuel, I am sorry it has taken me so long to reach out to you, but I am writing to explain why we could not see as agreed when I visited London during the Christmas period.
This
was due to circumstances beyond my control. Let me explain in more detail. I am sure you remember I mentioned that the visit would be a really short one because I needed to resume back to work the
first
week in January.
Also
, my sister came over too, and the parents wanted to spend ample time with her.
This
is because we have not celebrated Christmas together in six years. So, we wanted to spend as much time as possible together. I know I should have communicated with you about the change in plans beforehand or when I realized connecting would not be feasible. For that, I am so sorry, but I would be returning soon. Can I suggest we see when I return in June? We could spend a weekend at Bicester Village. Not to worry, all expenses would be on me,
this
is to make up for the no show. I would love to hear what you think about the above suggestion,
this
is in order to make
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. Warm Regards, Tobi.
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