Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, many people have increasingly shifted their preferences in the way they purchase

such

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goods as books,

airplane

a hose that carries air under pressure

airline

tickets, and groceries from offline to online.

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shopping on the Internet may have some drawbacks, I personally think that its advantages do

outweighthose

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outweigh those

disadvantages, which I will explain.

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, one factor that affects most people’s decisions to buy

somethingis

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something is

the information on those items which they receive through perception, smelling, or touching.

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such

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data

is limited

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are limited

when searching

onlinefor

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online for

goods.

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, people can have

misunderstandingsabout

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misunderstandings about

the things they want to

spendtheir

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spend their

money on, causing poor judgement resulting in unwanted goods. For example, people usually try wearing clothes

first

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to see how fit before buying.

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this

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cannot be done so in online shopping, and the only information the buyers can retrieve is a size chart.

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, there are more chances of

gettingthe

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getting the

sizes wrong when online buying.

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, lots of online shops have attempted to solve the above

mentionedissue

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mentioned issue

by having products guaranteed.

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, if

purchasersare

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purchasers are

not satisfied with

theitemsthey

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purchase, they can exchange or return within a given period of

time

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after buying. For instance, some online marketplaces let their consumers return things within 14 days after receiving the products, and the process

iseveneasier

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than the offline returned method. Another benefit of buying things on the Internet is that it can save more

time

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. To demonstrate, purchasing things through online mediums can be done at home or anywhere, so people do not need to waste their

time

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transporting themselves to shops,

especiallyduring

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especially during

rush hour. . For example, individuals can complete the purchasing process on the Internet within a

fewminutes

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few minutes

, but they may need hours to go to actual shops if the shops are far away. To summarize, many people may experience some mistakes in online buying, but returning online purchases is becoming easier.

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, the Internet, in terms of shopping, significantly helps save people’s

time

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

316 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
time-saving
wide selection
competitive prices
discounts
accessibility
global marketplace
availability
fraud
scams
lack of
physical interaction
personal experience
impersonal
customer service
delays
delivery
return process

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

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