Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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work
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this
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women need money to take Suggestion
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disadvantaging
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female
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raise
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childcare
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focus
focussed
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always trusts
mom
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name
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care
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care
of children Use synonyms
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,
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state of well-being characterized by emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy
happiness
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of
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of him when he was younger. Use synonyms
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, the boy if his mom wasn't around too much when he get older he will be reject his mother. Linking Words
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him to
love him.
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